hollow but tight
the sound is nice it's got a sweet little tune but it sounds sort of empty i think it would really help to tighten it up if there was sort of a drone [constant note or sound in the back ground] in it
hollow but tight
the sound is nice it's got a sweet little tune but it sounds sort of empty i think it would really help to tighten it up if there was sort of a drone [constant note or sound in the back ground] in it
That would make it better, thanks for your comment.
funny little bass sound
i like this song and i like the drop out i'm guessing that's fuity loops guitar? idk but if you remake this with a real guitar i'd really like to hear it defiantly if u add a real bass instead of that bloby sounding bass bc i really like the bass line
Remaking this song with better sounding instruments was already in my plans! And I don't use Fruity Loops by the way. I work with Cubase 5 and plug-ins.
Things will only go for the better I swear. Thank you for commenting again!
i like it but it dosnt sparkle enoughhh
good intro but it's a boring song there's nothing in to make me want to listen to it for the full length without fast fording it's a beautiful little piece but it's a little weak maybe a touch of background sparkles or a strong flowing lead line would help but i cant deny it's a very nice listen
Thanks for the comment bro!
good start needs a lead
first thing what is NI maschine? second this is kinda background noise instead of a song the beat is fun tho and with a lead line this could make a niffty little song but by it's self it doesn't really stand strong
It's Native Instruments "groovebox" type thing. It's like a hybrid of the Akai MPC series and looping software. Go to Native Instruments website and you can find out everything you want.
And yeah, it's background noise but I thought it was interesting enough to share. I probably will add to this but I got stuck and decided to put it up in current form for now.
Thanks for reviewing!
relaxed
one transition totally like drops the mood but other than that if u like ambientish guitar u should really check out some of my stuff it's seriously all i'm good at
Yeah I know exactly what transition you're talking about. It's something that comes with practice I guess.
Thanks for commenting man! I'll listen to your stuff for sure.
insperational
first off my fav build up i've ever herd in my life strait up
second i love how this song has something going on different in every measure so it's progressive insted of static and yet it dosent make it sound cluttered like a lot of songs like that do truly inspirational
Thank you! Great review :D
sometimes
i enjoy it in a way that it should be background music to a game it sounds a little dirty to me and it's very well done it's just not standalone materiel i would enjoy a little bit more build up in some of the transitions and yet other spots i love the drop out very interesting piece keep it up man
I know that in some games that they have a sequence (calm / action / sub-boss / boss / final boss) sort of deal. That's why I put that as loops, because I'm trying to go for a song that gets all those bits in one, and then can be cut into loops for a whole game...I think.
deep
the sound is deep and very easy to like but the lead line just doesn't do anything for me rape wise but much better than my fl skills
I just molested the shit out of the echo, but then my grandma came over and I had to put the chloroform away. The lead is kind of a turd. It goes nowhere. It's like a rythm lead on top of a lead that. I used to have lyrics to this but lost the original, and this is like the 3rd version of 6. If I find the final one I will ship it your way.
this review
this review is of the response u gave that guy and it made my day so u get a 10
Good!
enjoyfull
good structure the build up is amazing even with my short attention span i enjoy anything smooth and lets me chill and this is perfect for that bro
The buildup is good, but I think I could even do it better.
thx for the review!
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